In class we are working on describing our character and I chose to write about a homeless person. i tried to describe my character so that the reader would connect with him, do you think i have done that
The hungry, homeless human grovels on the dirty ground begging for cash. "The world is cruel" he repeats to himself the world is cruel.
The mysterious male has rugged ripped cargo shorts with a had-it brown top with countless holes. His isolated shoe less feet keep him colder than ever. His big bulging eyes make him look more depressed. The only features on this individual that keeps him warm is his huge hairy beard and his big bushy Afro.
"Get a life loser" or "mum, why is that man sleeping on the ground?" Those are most common for this long gone wreck. He gets abused, kicked and even spat on. "Life is cruel" he says life is cruel
The hungry, homeless human grovels on the dirty ground begging for cash. "The world is cruel" he repeats to himself the world is cruel.
The mysterious male has rugged ripped cargo shorts with a had-it brown top with countless holes. His isolated shoe less feet keep him colder than ever. His big bulging eyes make him look more depressed. The only features on this individual that keeps him warm is his huge hairy beard and his big bushy Afro.
"Get a life loser" or "mum, why is that man sleeping on the ground?" Those are most common for this long gone wreck. He gets abused, kicked and even spat on. "Life is cruel" he says life is cruel
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